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Welcome to a new
edition of the Word Constructions newsletter, and a new financial
year.
Half the year has gone and yet it
feels like it just started - unless I consider what I have achieved
in my business during those six months. It has been a busy time and
clients just seem to want more and more writing down!
I have had a couple of recent
achievements - I finished my training and bookwork for two
certificate IV courses, being frontline management and leadership.
From here, I could move onto a diploma of business but that won't be
this year! I have also been interviewing for an assistant to do some
of my office work so I have more time for writing - she will be
starting next week.
As I get closer to my baby's
arrival, the topic of taking leave from your own business is
obviously something I am conscious of. It is definitely one of the
issues of being a sole trader - the business relies entirely upon
you and your presence. So how have you coped with taking leave,
whether it would called annual leave, sick leave, compassionate
leave or maternity leave for an employee? Do you have a
contingency plan of someone who can help run your business?
Use your words wisely!
Tash
PS In less than two
weeks, I will be one of the presenters at the
Business Mums conference - and a participant in the remainder of
the weekend. If you haven't yet thought about coming, I suggest you
consider it as a valuable business building tool - I learnt a lot at
last year's conference and gained a lot of networking relationships
as well. I have a few discounted tickets ($100 off for the entire
weekend, $50 for a single day) available for subscribers, too, so
let me know if you want to go and I'll send you an amended
registration form.
Tash Hughes 0428 376 110 fax 03 9445
9154
blog -
www.wordconstructions.com.au/blog
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It is a wise person that adapts themselves to all
contingencies; it's the fool who always struggles like a swimmer
against the current.
- Unknown (but based on a proverb)
Financial year tips
By Tash Hughes of
Word
Constructions
With the
start of a new financial year, now is a great time to get things in
order and be prepared for reporting this year's results. Here are
some of the things I do (or at least plan to do!) in early July - I
hope they help you remember some important tasks, too!
-
record
the odometer reading from your car, even if you don't use the
car much for business, recording it now is easier than trying to
guess it next July!
-
send out
statements for any outstanding invoices
-
make
sure all incoming invoices and receipts are entered into your
accounting system
-
update
your lists of equipment that you depreciate for business - how
much longer can you depreciate those items?
-
update
your household account records, too, especially if you run an
office from home as some of those expense may be tax deductible
-
take the
time to sit down and consider last financial year - was it
successful? what worked, and what didn't work? were there a lot
of unnecessary expenses? - and use that information to plan out
this financial year, or update your business plan
-
archive
old files on your computer so finding current files is easier
and quicker
-
back up
everything, including email files, archives, favourites and your
desktop
-
tidy
your desk and throw out all the old notes you don't need or
transfer the information into a single place
-
check
your office for safety - for example, download the worksafe
guide on how to best set up your chair and desk
-
plan
your personal and professional development for the coming year
-
if you
send our newsletters or other customer documents, plan the
themes or topic you will cover so it is easier to prepare when
the time comes and you are rushed

Backing up your computer is a basic contingency plan, and should be
done regularly...
How to complain professionally
By Tash Hughes of
Word
Constructions
The main difference
between a professional complaint and a nasty complaint, is how it is
delivered.
Some points to keep in
mind when making your next complaint are:
- Stay calm and be
polite
- Whenever possible,
complain privately to minimise embarrassment to the other party
- Complain directly to
the person/business, not loudly to someone else
- Keep the complaint
about the product, service or situation, not about the person
you are talking to. So it is better to say “This product is
broken” rather than “You gave me a broken product”.
- Know what you want
to happen, for instance, a refund, a replacement or a discount.
Stating this clearly is professional and will help the person to
help you, especially if you are putting a complaint in writing
If you can’t complain
professionally or in person, consider writing your complaint.
Whether you write a letter or an email, leave some time between
writing it and sending it so you can check it is polite and
appropriate.
For a written complaint,
it is worth remembering that a person will be reading the message so
it is still important to be polite and reasonable. Take care to be
very clear in your letter or email as it is easy for
misunderstandings to occur when they can’t hear or see you.
When you complain in
person you can see the person’s reaction and know you have been
heard. If you send a letter or email, you can’t always be sure the
person has received and read your message. Check if they have
received it before you accuse them of ignoring you.
In short, if you make a
complaint the way you would want a customer to complain to you,
you’re probably doing it right!
For more information about dealing with complaints as the business
owner, my articles
Dealing with customer complaints and
Customer Complaints System may be of use for you.
Online study can be a good way to fit it in amongst other
commitments, like a business!
Poor examples
Sometimes, the easiest
way to learn the correct way to do something is to see it done
poorly so in this section of my newsletter, I show you some
real-life examples of writing that need a little help.
This example is longer than usual, but it is the differences between
the sentences that is at issue in this case. The paragraph was the
opening of a business newsletter I received recently - an opening
that I didn't read past to be honest as it was confusing rather than
inviting. Note I have changed the wording slightly to remove
identifying information.
example:
Welcome to
the guest group this week receiving our newsletter. It was great
to be able to meet up with such a great group and share
some of my knowledge with them. I do hope you enjoy this
edition of the newsletter which is distributed regularly
to members. They may take advantage of any of the specials listed.
Issues with this
example:
Who is this introduction written to? First the text refers to a
guest group, then addresses that group as 'you' before returning to
calling the group 'they'.
The inconsistency makes the whole introduction clumsy and confusing,
and illustrates my often repeated point - know your audience. The
writer of this newsletter needed to choose whether she was writing
about this guest group or to them - if she doesn't know who she is
writing to, how can her readers know? And this defeats part of the
beauty of email newsletters - they can be personalised to suit the
readers.
A better version would
be: (without changing the meaning)
Welcome to all our readers, especially those of
you from {guest group name} I recently met this great group of
people and shared some business experiences with them.
I hope everyone enjoys this edition of the
newsletter and takes advantage of any listed specials.
And even better would be to send the guest group the
newsletter separately to eh main mailing list so a truly
personalised opening could be added - and there would be no risk
of accidentally leaving people on the mailing list without their
permission. The introduction could then be something like:
Welcome to members of {group name}! It was
great to meet you all and share some business experiences with you.
The following is my newsletter which I
regularly send out to members. I hope you find it useful and take
advantage of the listed specials. To get this newsletter in the
future, please {add appropriate instructions}
You are welcome to
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